The Club Penguin Detectives #1: The Search for the Golden Penguin.

[Colddude018]

Hi! I'm Colddude018, better known for being Prof. Pickles McPretzel on TTC, and I write stories. I've wrote 1 on TTC and am working on a series there, so I will start a series here.
The Club Penguin Detectives is about a group of penguins that search all of Club Penguin's rumors. You know, like when Yellow Puffles were the buzz. While, I've heard toons talk about a Golden Penguin, which they claim to be the penguin who took care of the yellow puffles before they were took to the pet shop. Well, these penguins are gonna either bust the rumor, or figure out it's real.
Anyways, here's Chapter 1.
Chapter 1A: The start of the team.
Club Penguin was always a place for penguins to play, chat, and have fun. Until one day, trouble came about Club Penguin. Rumors. Who was gonna stop them? Your gonna find out.
One day, 2 penguins named Colddude018 and apj0 were eating lunch at Colddude's igloo.
"Ap?" Colddude asked, swallowing some of his fish sticks. "Yeah?" Ap asked, putting down his last fish stick. "Don't those rumors bug you?" Colddude asked. "Well, duh!" Ap replied. "Lets solve them." Colddude said.
"WHAT?!" Ap yelled in shock, startling Colddude's yellow puffle who was painting a picture of a yellowish penguin.
"Yeah, like the-" Colddude started, when his yellow puffle, Gold, showed the penguins a picture of a gold penguin.
"Good idea!" Colddude said. "We can search about the gold penguin rumor!"
"I don't know...." Ap said.
"Come on." Colddude told Ap. "OK..." Ap said, still having second thoughts.
Then, Colddude got Gold on a leash, and the penguins walked to the Plaza.
End of chapter.
Signups go like this.
Penguin:______
That's it! Have a good day!
~Colddude018~
P.S: Ap's my best friend on Club Penguin and real life, so instead of making up a penguin for chapter 1, I used him.
Using brains CAN be good! :Xcheesy:

[Syon]

I was wonder if I could sighn up My Penguins name is Pudinman53 and he is purple:Xwink:

[Bluefire78]

could you put me in the next chapter my name is Bluefire78 and im light blue

[Colddude018]

You guys are in.
Chapter 2A: The new recruits, and a new quest.
The penguins walked to the Plaza, where they saw 3 penguins.
"Who are you guys?" Colddude asked.
"Well, I'm Bluefire, and this is Pudinman." A light blue penguin said.
"Nice to meet you two." Pudinman, a purple penguin replied.
"Then who's the other penguin? I'm Apj0, and this is Colddude." Ap asked.
"That's Billybob." Bluefire said.
"Yes, I give penguins quest through different lands to investigate mysteries of Club Penguin." Billybob said. "And you 4 will go to Rockhopper Island, and search for the Golden Penguin. He's said to be located there, but I'm not sure if it's true."
"REALLY?!" Colddude asked. "Yes." Billybob said. "Also, you'll come with Rockhopper, and go to the island. If you see the penguin, take his picture, and give him to Aunt Artic."
"Lets get going then!" Pudinman exclaimed.
The penguins went to Rockhopper and his ship. "Yarrrgh." Rockhopper said. "Nice to meet you penguins."
"Nice to meet you too." Apj0 said.
"Are you the ones going to Rockhopper Island?" Rockhopper asked. "Yes." Colddude replied. "Then lets set sail!" Rockhopper said.
Yarrrrgh and Gold started to play, then Rockhopper set sail.
"How about you penguins go to the Ship Hold and take a rest?" Rockhopper asked.
"Why thank you sir." Apj0 replied. Then the penguins went into the Ship Hold, not knowing what tragic thing would happen in a short time.
End of chapter.
Hope you liked it! Also, I need more signups, so sign up today!
~PpMc~

[Harry At 797]

I would like to be in it...:Xwink:

Penguin name: Harry At 797 (just call me Harry)
Color: black
I got an idea for it...I can be a Tour Guide on Rockhopper Island that leads you to the Golden Penguin. Just an idea...:Xtongue::Xwink:

[Colddude018]

I would like to be in it...:Xwink:

Penguin name: Harry At 797 (just call me Harry)
Color: black
I got an idea for it...I can be a Tour Guide on Rockhopper Island that leads you to the Golden Penguin. Just an idea...:Xtongue::Xwink:
Sorry, the story isn't gonna be that short, but your in it.

[King Ray]

Nice story!

[Colddude018]

Nice story!
Thank you. Aren't you Master Spike Googledorf on TTC? Anyways, here's the new chapter. The evil villan won't be a signup, only good guys are on signups.
Chapter 3A: Battles on the sea.
The penguins were checking out all of the Ship Hold, when they heard a roar outside. They all rushed up, including the puffles.
"What's happening?" Bluefire asked, frightened. "A ship is attacking!" Rockhopper exclaimed. "Who could be attacking you?" Apj asked. "No other then the Ninja Penguin." Rockhopper replied.
Suddenly, a cannonball was shot. Rockhopper dodged it. "We're gonna drown!" Colddude shouted. "What should we do?!" Pudinman exclaimed. "Arm the cannons! FIRE!!!!!" Rockhopper shouted.
The team of penguins got onto the cannons, and fired as fast as possible. The ship got closer to The Migrator, and the Ninja Penguin and his ship invaded the ship. "Run to the ship hold!" Rockhopper shouted to the penguins. "These are only his minions! The leader of the Ninja Penguin's isn't here!"
"OK!" The team yelled, running into the hold. Unfortunately, the evil crew followed, but one stuck out. As the crew surrounded, the penguin, wearing a tour guide hat, mouthed, "Help me"! Then, our team attacked. (Even the puffles!)
End of chapter.
Will our team win? Find out in Chapter 4A.
~PpMc~

[King Ray]

Yes, I am and still nice chapter.

[Bluefire78]

awsome thanks for putting me in you make good stores cant wait for the next one

[Syon]

Awesome story clap clap clap clap ok ill stop LOL

[Colddude018]

This is one of the first big stories CPF has ever had, and I'm proud to be writing it. Now for the new chapter. Also, King Ray, do you wish to be in this story (I ♥ the weekend!!!!)
Chapter 5A: Clash of the crews.
The evil crew moved out of the way, but the tour guide penguin moved the oppisite way, looking for a place to hide. All the penguins fell to the ground missing the evil team. The puffles, however, bit 2 penguins of the 4 man crew before the our team fell. "Go Yarrrrgh and Gold!" Colddude yelled, getting up. Our team got up, and this time, they jumped to 2 sides, trapping the evil crew. 2 penguins went down. "2 to go!" Apj0 yelled. Bluefire suddenly kicked a penguin down to the ground. Pudinman finished the last one off, punching it to the ground.
"Is it safe?" The tour guide asked. "Yeah." Bluefire said. "What's your name?" "My name's Harry, the Ninja Penguin crew sunk my ship, and then I hopped onto the other ship to not drown, and then it was all down-hill." Harry replied.
Suddenly, the ship stopped moving.
"Lets go outside." Pudinman said. The penguins all walked outside.
"Land-ho!" Rockhopper exclaimed as the penguins walked outside. "We're now at Rockhopper Island. I'll help you on your journey."
"Thank you Rockhopper!" Colddude said. The puffles grew big smiles, and the penguins started walking.
End of chapter.
Hope you liked it!
~Colddude018~

[Bluefire78]

Awesome story i like the party were i kicked the penguin!

[Harry At 797]

AWWW, no.:Xgrin: My ship got sunk. lol I like it.

[Colddude018]

New chapter soon!

[Bluefire78]

i hope its really soon

[Hyper Jacob]

Before you post it, I'd like to signup.
Name:Hyper
Color:Purple
Personality:Cool and calm. Sometimes a bit Hyper though.
I hope i can be in the next chapter

[giatekla]

Penguin: Flanders Man
Color: Depends on my mood

[Colddude018]

New chapter Christmas!!!

[Paydenfull]

I would like to sign up!

Penguin name: Paydenfull
Color: Dark Blue

Goodluck with that new chapter ;)

[Colddude018]

New chapter! (Sorry for being late.) The new chapter is AWESOME though!
Chapter 6A: Fighting Ninjas Part One: The first batch.
The penguins and puffles were walking along, when they came across a group of penguins wearing clothing like the evil Ninja Crew!
The team ran towards, seeing 3 penguins not wearing the clothes the Ninja's wore, signaling to the penguins they were trapped.
"Arr, stop right there!" Rockhopper exclaimed.
"Hey, the old pirate! Get him boys!" The leader said.
Most of the team attacked, while 3 stayed behind to hold the trapped penguins.
Colddude, Apj0 and Gold ran over to the captives and the ninja's keeping the captives, and the rest of our team ran to attack the ninja's.
Gold bit one ninja, releasing a dark blue penguin.
The penguin ran to hide from the ninjas.
Apj0 kicked the penguin, and Colddude did the last blow.
One ninja down for the first of our team.
The other team had everyone fighting their own enemy.
Pudinman was fighting, punching with his flippers of lightning.
The ninja fell down.
Rockhopper and Yarrrgh were fighting 5 ninjas.
Rockhopper slammed the ninjas to the ground, and Yarrrgh bit them all, and those penguins were done.
Bluefire and Harry were fighting together though, however, fighting 2 ninja's.
Bluefire threw a kick, throwing a ninja to the ground, and Harry said a bunch of tour guide stuff, making a ninja have a headache, and that ninja fell.
By then, the ninja's were all defeated, and the penguins were rescued.
"Thanks." A purple penguin said.
"I'm Hyper, the dark-blue penguin is Paydenfull, and the yellow penguin is Flandersman."
"Hi." Colddude said, then introducing the team.
"Well, lets go continue our search for the golden penguin!" Flandersman said.
Then, the team walked on.
End of chapter.
Hope you liked it!
~Colddude018~

[Harry At 797]

Sweet! I got super Tour Guide Headache powers! AWESOME!:penguin2::penguin1:
I like it, very cool.

[giatekla]

Flanders and Man are separate names...but your story so far is AWESOME!!!! Until then, waddle on! :penguin2:

[Bluefire78]

Awsome story i hope you make more

[Paydenfull]

Awesome chapter!
(Why am I always the one being captured? Heh heh...)
Hope you can come out with more soon

[Colddude018]

Uh, Bump???

[Syon]

awesome chapter woohoo! I have flippers of lightning I wonder if I know any jutsus?

[Bluefire78]

when will the next one come out i want more please

[Colddude018]

Bump. 1 reply from someone NEW for new chapter.

[Syon]

Can't wait for the next chapter its probaly going to be awesome

[Harry At 797]

Ditto, I can't wait.:Valgrin: I'm a nice penguin, but I hate valentine smileys....:Valtongue:

[Dark Trent]

Nice Story

[giatekla]

I can't wait for more.

MORE PLEASE!!!!! :Vallaugh:

[Colddude018]

Oooh, a huge bump. Anyone still want some MORE?

[Brain]

I want more of course, this story is great!

[Bluefire78]

come on post some more storys

[giatekla]

Yes, we need more stories. Or has the series ended? Just kidding, it hasn't. But it still has to be more stories! For sure! :RedFace:

[Colddude018]

Here’s the chapter after a month or two.
Chapter 7A: The Forest of Ponies.
The penguins ran to a forest, the next path on the island.
Suddenly, the forest turned pink and ponies skipped around.
“OK. What in the world is going on here!??” cried Colddude.
“Ponies, aah! Too girly!” exclaimed Apj0.
“Well, a trap will set off if this story is extremely lame, like one’s ~PpMc~ writes.” said Rockhopper.
Suddenly, ninjas flew into the air, and jumped onto the ponies.
“BUTTERCUP! RIDE!” yelled the ninja leader.
“This just gets weirder!” cried Harry.
“I agree.” said Paydenfull.
Suddenly, ninjas on ponies attacked the penguins.
“How can I hurt something so cute and cuddly?” asked Bluefire.
“You can’t.” said Flanders Man. “You run away…”
“Oh yeah.” replied Bluefire.
Suddenly, the ponies started to show off their teeth, which were as sharp as a needle.
“When are we going to start running…?” asked Hyper.
Suddenly, the rest of the penguins charged off.
“I guess now.” he muttered.
Then, he charged to catch up with his teammates.
Meanwhile, the pony ninjas were chasing the penguins.
“Aah! Buttercup the pony and the ninja leader are so fearsome!!” said Colddude sarcastically.
“You’ll pay!” cried the ninja troop leader, charging at Colddude.
Suddenly, Colddude slapped the ninja as he came, knocking him off Buttercup.
All the ponies got scared, and charged off.
“Phew, I can’t believe how ponies could be so scary!” cried Apj0.
“I KNOW!” exclaimed Bluefire.
“Should we keep going?” interrupted Harry.
“I guess.” replied Hyper.
“Well, first of all…” started Rockhopper…
“Yes?” asked Flanders Man.
“Where’s Yarrgh, and where’s Gold?” he asked.
“Oh, I kept them hidden in my backpack during the battle.” said Paydenfull.
“Thank goodness.” said Colddude.
“Lets go already!” cried Harry.
Then, the penguins walked off.
End of chapter.
Brain, want to be in the story? Anyone who’s reading can be in the story.
~Colddude018~

[Colddude018]

You guys couldn't wait, then didn't read? :shocked:

[giatekla]

Kewl... I only appear twice on the story... :shocked: LOL.

Nice story though to have maken it in one-two months.

[Paydenfull]

Good chapter. Can't wait for some more.

[Dark Trent]

Penguin Name: Dark Trent
Colour:Black but the colour can be changed.

[Syon]

Whens the next Chapter?! I am hungry :Popcorn: The only way I won't be hungry is if I read another chapter

[Bluefire78]

lol thanks

one thing im a serious person and i dont like PONIES!!!! im oalmost 500 days old in ClubPenguin

[Savanabanana99]

lol thats so AWESOMELY AWESOME!! LOL can i be in the story??
My penguin's name is.... Mrbiggle hehe...
My penguin is pink.
hope i can be in it! thnx!
and ur storys rnt awesome any more!!! :Tongue:






ITS AWESOMELY AWSOME!!!! lol!

[Bluefire78]

lol???? i guess

[Colddude018]

The new chapter will be out tommorow or Monday!

[Bluefire78]

yay!!! thanks for you hard work on making these storys...

[Colddude018]

Chapter 8A: The Mountain Of DOOM!

The team rushed through the frilliness path, that made Colddude faint, making Rockhopper carry the not awake penguin.
Suddenly, the penguins got to a huge mountain.
"I'm awa-" Colddude started, when he saw that the mountain was pink and infested with ponies.
"AAAHHHH!" Colddude shrieked, screaming like a girl.
"Lets just get through it!" Apj0 said.
So, the penguins ran through the mountain to see a pink penguin.
"HEY!" Paydenfull cried.
The penguin turned to see the penguins, and waddled over.
"Hi! I'm mrbiggle, what's your name?" the penguin asked.
So, the team introduced themselves, and marched on.
Suddenly, Flanders Man saw a few penguins, and cried, "NINJA PENGUINS!!!"
The team looked up and saw 5 ninja penguins, who looked high ranked.
"Time to kick some ninja hiney!" Harry cried.
Suddenly, Hyper saw that that 1 of the penguins wasn't a ninja, and took him to protection.
"Thanks a ton! I'm Dark Trent." the penguin said.
"I'm Hyper." Hyper said.
"How hyper are ya?" Dark Trent asked.
"Hyper is my name." Hyper replied.
"Oh, my apoligies..." Dark Trent told Hyper.
Meanwhile, the penguins were beating up the ninjas like they were defenseless.
"That was simple-" Colddude started, when all of the Detectives were trapped in a box, and took away to a dark factory outside of the island.

End of chapter.
~PpMc~

[Caskfa]

Could I be in the story?

Name: Caskfa
I am a girl

Also maybe I could be a girl on here that one of you 'GUYS' fall in love with. Maybe even you.

JK, lol

Thats why Eeyore is laughing...

[Colddude018]

Your in, but that won't happen. xD

[Caskfa]

Thanks so much! When is the next chapter out? And exactly who would I be?

Your in, but that won't happen. xD

Much Obliged;)

yay!!! thanks for you hard work on making these storys...

yes thank you so much! (nicely written bluefire)

Are you going to post the next chapters? I'm really looking forward to being in them.

[Bluefire78]

lol i was not in the story why not?

[Savanabanana99]

That was AWESOME!!!! I'm TOTALLY! gonna be an AWESOME!! penguin!!!!! I wanna kick some "Ninja Hiney" lol!!!! that made me rotfl

[Bluefire78]

that was so AWeSOMLY AWESOME right! jk lol i would never say awesomly awesome its in my blood. and if i do i would be kiding..

[Savanabanana99]

lol i heard it from... actually i dont knw!!!!! lol!!! theres a lot of those kind of words...

[Bluefire78]

.... when will there be a new story?

[Savanabanana99]

yea..... plz!!! post new storys!!! i cant wait!!!! XD

[Savanabanana99]

its been a month whens the new story? plz respond i've been waiting 4ever!!!!

[Bluefire78]

Yah your right ... plz make there be a new story! I want there to be a new one.



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Peace

[Savanabanana99]

Nobody's resbonded. I'm off to pm Coldude!!! XP