Silly Sandy Sparklesocks
10-13-2007, 04:38 PM
Chapter One:
It was a day I could remember all of my life, my friend and I were together alone on a cold summers day, on the edge of a Iceberg near to where we lived. My friend asked me, "Is there ever going to be anyone finding out about this place? As if anyone is going to see it I don't really know, what do you think?" I replied, "Nah, as long as we're here together we can save this place from being tipped." People were trying to demolish this wonderful place, but to us two, this was our one and only den. No-one and I mean no-one should ever harm our land and our memories there. Suddenly my friend decided to go for a swim around our Iceberg just to warm up. The weather was very windy and I was afraid to go in. All of a sudden my friend yelped, "Help help! I can't get back! HEEEELP!" I shivered and got really petrified. I couldn't believe it! My bestest friend in the world was drifting away out of my sight! I rapidly jumped of the Iceberg, and swam toward him, I grabbed him and tried to swim back. But the wind was too blustery. It pushed us away from our land and we couldn't get back. In a few moments later, we were in the middle of nowhere....
Any comments? Will be posting second chapter soon.
It was a day I could remember all of my life, my friend and I were together alone on a cold summers day, on the edge of a Iceberg near to where we lived. My friend asked me, "Is there ever going to be anyone finding out about this place? As if anyone is going to see it I don't really know, what do you think?" I replied, "Nah, as long as we're here together we can save this place from being tipped." People were trying to demolish this wonderful place, but to us two, this was our one and only den. No-one and I mean no-one should ever harm our land and our memories there. Suddenly my friend decided to go for a swim around our Iceberg just to warm up. The weather was very windy and I was afraid to go in. All of a sudden my friend yelped, "Help help! I can't get back! HEEEELP!" I shivered and got really petrified. I couldn't believe it! My bestest friend in the world was drifting away out of my sight! I rapidly jumped of the Iceberg, and swam toward him, I grabbed him and tried to swim back. But the wind was too blustery. It pushed us away from our land and we couldn't get back. In a few moments later, we were in the middle of nowhere....
Any comments? Will be posting second chapter soon.