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Angel391
09-30-2007, 02:53 PM
I was in my friend, Cuddles estate. along with another girl. Her name was Autumn. She was so mean to me. So I tried adding her to my friends list. It worked. But then all of the sudden, she took me off her friend list. I tried again. It worked. but when I got back to the playground, she took me off again, and so did cuddles. My feelings got hurt.

Later on, I decided to find another friend. I found one named sheif Pearl. She was so cool. We talked, raced at goofy speedway, played 31 trolley games, and went to each others estate.

Then, this guy, Mr. Brown, came up to me and started talking to me in that " eeky eeky ekyyy eek ekkers eeky" voice. It got SO annoying. He followed me around intil I asked sheif pearl to go to her estate. We did. But then I found out, that Mr.Brown was on Sheif Pearls friend list!


then, Me and Sheirf Pearl, went to donalds dock. Mr.Brown was not a full paid member so he could not go.






read more of my storys. The snakes and ladders, short storys.

The end.

Goldpuff
09-30-2007, 04:52 PM
You could try chapters. Also, this is a CLUB PENGUIN forum. Maybe tey should add "Other Stories" Overall, it was good. (and I though full paidand non-paid played on different servers)