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Halie =D
09-14-2009, 10:20 PM
Haitharpplz. xD My name is Halie. The author at heart! :D

Here's my first CP story. Enjoy? :D


Prologue

Everything's changed. The Shadows have taken over. The evil, heartless, Shadows. An organization in the need of a hideout.

Club Penguin's island, of course.

The Shadows were actually penguins. Really buff penguins. They were black, they wore all black, and no other penguins could see their faces.

All penguins knew that they couldn't win. Including the secret agents.

But, yet, there was a light of hope. One secret agent had a brother that was a Shadow. She knew everything. So she would fight back.

No one else trusted her. They just screamed every day, fearful that Club Penguin was coming to an end.

That secret agent was on a mission right now.

That secret agent is me.

My name is Raven. I am a one year secret agent, a rookie compared to everyone else. I was lucky to even be a secret agent. One penguin helped me through to the end.

Shadow.

She’s a four year secret agent, and a great one at that. She tops every other agent. I struggle to like her. I get teased and pushed around, but I ignore it.

She’s called Shadow because her life’s goal is to get rid of the Shadows. She says there was a prophecy about her when she was little, about a girl bringing peace to Club Penguin. Obviously, it was her.

“Raven,” Shadow whispered through the earphone. “Can you hear me? Are you alright? Can you see any Shadows?”

“Yes, yes, no,” I assured her. “Everything’s clear.”

“I’m so worried about you,” she breathed. “You could perish on this mission.”

I snapped back, “I’ll be perfectly fine.”

She sighed lightly. My eyes suddenly widened.

A dark shape was walking across the snow.

I panicked. “Shadow! Shadow! There’s…someone there! WHAT DO I DO?!”

“It’s alright.” Her voice was calm, but I knew she was still slightly scared. “Can they see you?”

“No.”

“Alright. Sneak up on them.”

I stealthily crept up to them, sinking into the snow. I stepped on a twig.

They spun around.

I held my breath.

“I’m mapping you. I see them. They see you. Run, or fight, or something!” Shadow suddenly panicked as well.

“Who are you?!” the shape exclaimed.

“N….no one,” I stammered, knowing I was about to be finished. Shadow sobbed.

Suddenly, the Shadow removed his hood and face mask.

I drew in a sharp breath. My blood seemed to turn to ice. “B-brother…!”


Okie, I'm accepting SIGN-UPS! xD


Name:
Color:
Personality:
Clothes:
History:
Secret agent?:
Tour guide?:
Is your penguin afraid of the Shadows?:


Tyvmz pplz,


~Halie

candy charm2
09-15-2009, 04:08 AM
Name: Candy
Color: Light Pink
Personality: Candy is a very weird person who hangs out with a strange group she is very quiet kinda like edward form twilight
Clothes: black mini skirt white tee shirt black belt
History: she appeared at the middle at night waddling alone with no mother or father she was a very little penguin when that happened

Is your penguin afraid of the Shadows?: not at all
Secret agent?: no
Tour guide?: no

Flippers 777
09-15-2009, 02:45 PM
Cool!

Name: Flippers
Color: Purple
Personality: She loves adventure, and can be a dare devil. But she is kind, ready to help other penguins. She will do anything to help the island. She is also a tom boy. (lol that sounds like me)
Clothes. Green hoodie and topaz necklace, normal sandals (not colored just brown) and the yellow pony tail. Not the one on the side the normal one.
History: No one is sure were she came from. When she was little she showed up and went to the dojo. But growing she's been treated normally and has many friends. Now shes 11.

Is your penguin afraid of the shadows?: She knows if she has to run away, she has to run away, but no, not scared.
Secret agent?:Yes
Tour guide?: Yeah but i did it for the hat.


P.S She is a very good ninja, no one knows that though.

Halie =D
09-16-2009, 12:22 AM
Aw, thankies. xD I'll be working on it.

Annalina3
09-16-2009, 06:35 PM
Your stories are always really good. Me keep track of this one.


Name: Annalina3
Color: Pink
Personality: Silly.
Clothes: She likes her martial arts, and wears a ninja suit.
History: Was found close to the Dojo as a child, when old enough, started working toward Ninja suit.
Secret agent?: Yes
Tour guide?: Yes, but she doesn't do a lot of tours. She uses this position to get around unharmed.
Is your penguin afraid of the Shadows?: No way.

Miss Terry 3
09-16-2009, 11:13 PM
mmph...
It's...good.
Suspenseful...

Halie =D
09-18-2009, 08:24 PM
TYVM everyone. xD

Flippers 777
09-19-2009, 12:15 AM
I added to my form :)

Cicicoco97
09-20-2009, 09:08 PM
Omg! Hi Halie! I never knew you played Club Penguin too! :D Anyways, great story.
Name: Ceira1997
Color: Light Blue
Personality: Crazy and silly, and can get annoying, but is very brave.
Clothes: Black T-Shirt with a demin skirt
History: She was born on a different island, but traveled to Club Penguin with her twin sister. Nobody knows where she came from, and she doesn't like to talk about it.
Secret agent?: Yes
Tour guide?: Yes
Is your penguin afraid of the Shadows?: Nope :D

Halie =D
09-21-2009, 05:47 PM
XD Leaf? Lol. TYVM, I'm working on the chapter nao, I got held up BC I was sick.

polarbear5665
10-03-2009, 06:14 AM
Ohaithar Halie [you know you know me :O]. This is very interesting. Can't wait till you're done with the next chappie. :)

Halie =D
10-10-2009, 09:16 PM
Hi. >.> Lol. YOU PLAY CP? ='D

BriBri101
10-13-2009, 04:40 PM
Name: goldengal221 (Call her Golden/Lily if you like :D)
Color: purple
Personality: brave, funny, cute,
Clothes: blond side tied, Black sunglasses, vinyl messenger bag, Sometimes a black hoodie and sometimes a red swede jacket, brown fur boots.
History: Goldengal was spoted in the forest when she was younger, she has a sister named Cocoa332.
Secret agent?: Yes
Tour guide?: yes she rarely gives tous though,
Is your penguin afraid of the Shadows?: No

Annalina3
11-04-2009, 07:07 PM
I'll have to go talk to Halie and find out what happened to writing this.... :P