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ADisneyzoodude
08-08-2007, 01:23 AM
Hey everyone! I was bored so I made this story.... Title gives it away :D No copy!


~Chapter 1~
Once, there was a penguin named Aval. He was given that name by his parents after a terrible accident. I am sure most of you heard of the avalanche on Ski Mountain right?
Well, one of those penguins that got stranded was his dad. You know the one with the cast on his head? Anyways, a matter of days Aval was born. 5 years later, he was already helping GG with his latest inventions. But, one day he happened to glance over at the monitor screens… All of them lay empty except the top of Ski Mountain.


Cartoon Version of the story:
http://i11.************/4z4kx9j.jpg

~Chapter 2~


“G…G…GG!” Aval Said in a shakey voice.
“What may I do for you?” Replied GG
“Look at th..the mountain monitor!” Aval Said
As GG looked up from his paper work, he looked back down. But then realizing what Aval was pointing at, he threw his papers across the room and jumped into his chair.
“I will get a close up… But I think I know what they are” Said GG in a Grim voice
As GG pressed the plus key, he froze. So did Aval. GG reached for red button.
“GG! This is no time for coffe!” Aval Said.
“This isn’t the coffe button..” Replied GG
All of a sudden, some loud sirons went off. MILLIONS of agent penguins stormed in with the latest of GG’s gadgets. “Go out there and get those polar bears!”
The agents began to shake. But, they did what they where told.

Flash flood
08-08-2007, 01:53 AM
Cool! Looks like the start of a great story! Keep it up! :)

ADisneyzoodude
08-08-2007, 02:08 AM
Thanks Flash. Cartoon Version for Ch. 1 is up!

Vanilla
08-08-2007, 02:09 AM
Awesome i love it.

ADisneyzoodude
08-08-2007, 02:12 AM
thanks! Sorry the cartoon would have been out sooner but I forgot to add copyright

Orangemarker
08-08-2007, 04:35 AM
Copyright? Come on, it's a Club Penguin story, I don't think it needs a copyright.

ADisneyzoodude
08-08-2007, 01:58 PM
I dont care. On another site someone used my work AND claimed it was theres.

ADisneyzoodude
08-08-2007, 03:16 PM
Chapter 2 is out!

Skipatrolgirl
08-21-2007, 03:57 AM
i love ittttt

PolrbrGirl
08-21-2007, 11:54 PM
Ya! It's cool make more!

Sonic
09-08-2007, 04:26 AM
I think I know where you got this idea...

ADisneyzoodude
09-09-2007, 06:36 PM
wow you had to be smart to figure that out! xD

Sonic
09-12-2007, 12:48 AM
wow you had to be smart to figure that out! jk rofl
Wait... I thought I put that in that other thread about what was with the fur...:confused: Or maybe I only thought I was! I'll fix what I would have said.