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06-11-2008, 12:29 AM
Chpt. 1
"Ok, team, its the first hockey tryout of the year! 8 of you will make it, and the rest of you won"t." said Coach Jeff. All of the penguins looked confident exept one, Domino. He didnt know what he felt so he made a word for it: Sconvous. A mix of scared, nervous, and confedent. Even though they don't really sound like a good mix.
chpt.2
It was Domino's turn to hit the puck in the net. It was only a few yards away but it seemed like a mile. He hit the puck and crossed his fingers, and then he heard cheering.He did it and was on the team!!!! His teammates were nina, blackdog, jojo bee man, fire dill,brandon, joanah, and tiger.At the same time cheerleading tryouts were going on.there were five cheerleaders: sky, molly, zoey, megie, and lia.
chpt 3
"Hi sweetie how was school ?"asked Dominos mom.
"Great!" said Domino "I made the team!"
"Great! Your first game is in 3 weeks."
3 weeks later
"Ohh man am I nervous." said Domino.
"You all have nailed everything from the beginning of the season. You've practiced very hard and you all are going to cream the red team!" said coach Jeff.
"YEAH!!" screamed the blue team.
The members of the red team were Rose(the team captain), Soapy Bubble, Chocolate Chipper, K K, Dixx, Jert, Fliapperdoodle, and Sanders.
The whistle blew, and the game began.
I need feed back!
"Ok, team, its the first hockey tryout of the year! 8 of you will make it, and the rest of you won"t." said Coach Jeff. All of the penguins looked confident exept one, Domino. He didnt know what he felt so he made a word for it: Sconvous. A mix of scared, nervous, and confedent. Even though they don't really sound like a good mix.
chpt.2
It was Domino's turn to hit the puck in the net. It was only a few yards away but it seemed like a mile. He hit the puck and crossed his fingers, and then he heard cheering.He did it and was on the team!!!! His teammates were nina, blackdog, jojo bee man, fire dill,brandon, joanah, and tiger.At the same time cheerleading tryouts were going on.there were five cheerleaders: sky, molly, zoey, megie, and lia.
chpt 3
"Hi sweetie how was school ?"asked Dominos mom.
"Great!" said Domino "I made the team!"
"Great! Your first game is in 3 weeks."
3 weeks later
"Ohh man am I nervous." said Domino.
"You all have nailed everything from the beginning of the season. You've practiced very hard and you all are going to cream the red team!" said coach Jeff.
"YEAH!!" screamed the blue team.
The members of the red team were Rose(the team captain), Soapy Bubble, Chocolate Chipper, K K, Dixx, Jert, Fliapperdoodle, and Sanders.
The whistle blew, and the game began.
I need feed back!